this week for writing we have been writing a short story. My short story was about this light that a girl kept seeing so she walked towards it and something happened anyway i should spoil it. for a create task we had to write the story and then insert a paragraph from our story here is the paragraph I choose
I tried to touch the light, as I did I couldn't see my hand anymore. It was gone. I quickly took my hand out of what seemed to be a hole. I walked closer but I tripped on something and fell into the light. I woke up and I could see my mum and dad looking at a BABY! Where was I? That looks like my brother but he looks so young and why is he holding a baby? Oh that's me, I think I went back in time! Wow this is weird maybe if I change the time on my watch it will take me to the future, it didn't work maybe I could find a clock, oh wait something is changing wow that's me right now oh wait its changing again that's my brother and I in the car he's a good driver wait what am I doing why am I driving oh no wait what happened it went black what why is the car upside down did we crash is that my future I need to get out of here.
Hope you enjoyed the story :)
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