Writing task

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This weeks blog is about my writing task that we had for this week, this week we had to write sentences about Hansel and Gretel and make the sentences go form boring to exiting. We then had to write lots of sentences them. Here is the link to my sentences:

Sentences

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Have you ever read the story Hansel and Gretel? 

Writing Task

Hi and welcome back to my blog,

This week for Writing we have been working on use language features specific to the purpose of the text. For this we had to fix up a paragraph from our narrative story. Here is the link to my google slide I made.

Writing slide

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What do you think is going to happen next in my story?